Sunday, February 3, 2008

Allure of the underwater world and awful ailments of the deep by Thecla Scully- Critic

Positives:
-Scully gives the proper term for the medical problems and situations, but she also gives the "street names" for them.
-Scully also gives her sources in conveinent ways.
- The different sections make the information very easy to understand and make use of.

Negatives:
-In the first paragraph there is a section that is another language...it's confusing.
- Some of the wording is awkward.

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